Hey Group 3 - congratulations on completing your first cross-discipline, collaborative research mission! And you just made it before the dreaded gong - which, as you'll have realised as the day went on - is something of an achievement. Here, as a Scribd document, your presentation is a very lean affair, but it felt less so at the symposia. For some of the group members, there were clear issues with confidence - both in terms of engaging the audience and use of notes. You needed to project your voices much more and look at the audience. In terms of design, your powerpoint avoided much of the clutter than can be the death of a presentation - you kept things simple, with some choice quotes; that said, because you talked about a lot, and introduced a lot of context, it did feel as if you needed more images to help 'soak' up all that spoken word. It's a balancing act, obviously. Paul - you lifted the energy levels nicely in the concluding moments and used the powerpoint as your guide notes, which lent a noticeable lightness of touch to your segment; and Chris and I both liked the concluded slide - nicely speculative.
Hey Group 3 - congratulations on completing your first cross-discipline, collaborative research mission! And you just made it before the dreaded gong - which, as you'll have realised as the day went on - is something of an achievement. Here, as a Scribd document, your presentation is a very lean affair, but it felt less so at the symposia. For some of the group members, there were clear issues with confidence - both in terms of engaging the audience and use of notes. You needed to project your voices much more and look at the audience. In terms of design, your powerpoint avoided much of the clutter than can be the death of a presentation - you kept things simple, with some choice quotes; that said, because you talked about a lot, and introduced a lot of context, it did feel as if you needed more images to help 'soak' up all that spoken word. It's a balancing act, obviously. Paul - you lifted the energy levels nicely in the concluding moments and used the powerpoint as your guide notes, which lent a noticeable lightness of touch to your segment; and Chris and I both liked the concluded slide - nicely speculative.
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